Wood Bench Blue Prints Poem I Just Wrote, What Do You Think? Criticism Welcome.?

Poem I just wrote, what do you think? Criticism welcome.? - wood bench blue prints

Ah, tomorrow,
Gold and graceful flow.
You are a sweet
lived in the shadows for so long.
I'm sitting on a wooden bench in decomposition
Sunny Eden
looked at the sky and wonder
I could have entered my dreams, so fast?
I'm excited by her beauty
sharp spine showing Bush
Pain in the hearts of men,
and love for this world
while rows of sunflowers and roses intertwined
Development and aim of the sky
in the Adoration of the blue interior.
Perhaps this is what God wants?
For the man in front of your garden
and celebrations and fall into deep sleep
in the deep green grass?
For I am in love with the rays of the morning sun
illuminating this beautiful world.
Wild and thickets in the relationship
crazy, and the growth of weeds
entangled in love and peace
Crazy countless green
Thousands of thousands.
Color, color is everything!
Lush and vibrant,
this world vibrates in his hero
and the natural love
tangled and wild as it is. \\ \\ \\ \\ \\ \\ \\ \\ U0026lt;br> In the morning when you are back
Light of love into the hearts of men.